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| Whispers of Corruption Discussion | |
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| Topic Started: Jun 4 2009, 11:08 PM (149 Views) | |
| Mr. Lawltastic | Jun 4 2009, 11:08 PM Post #1 |
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Hmmm...this Fanta tastes like magic...I LIKE that *falls over*
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So yeah, I haven't written anything in a while, sooo...you like it? Hate it? Wanna kiss me for it? Wanna kill me for it? Feel free to let me know ^^; |
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| BarkAtTheMoon | Jun 4 2009, 11:15 PM Post #2 |
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Your Friendly Neighborhood Wolf
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The Prologue reads like a newspaper article and brings sleep to my eyes. Other than that, I would expect the actual chapters to be pretty damn impressive should it get that far, which I have no doubt it will. I'm curious as to what the cover-up entails. Keep goin' with it. It'll go somewhere, that's for sure. |
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| Cheeto | Jun 5 2009, 03:20 AM Post #3 |
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master of cheetos
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It was good a little slow but i liked it Batm's right you can def go somewhere w/ this |
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| PhoenixoKaZe | Jun 6 2009, 11:48 PM Post #4 |
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I think if goes well, the beginning might show that the story might be a intense one, up to the writer lol xD |
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| BarkAtTheMoon | Jun 7 2009, 09:36 PM Post #5 |
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Your Friendly Neighborhood Wolf
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I mean it better be intense. It's his first attempt at a novella style story. I'm hoping it's going to be as action filled as his other stories (all of which were written script style) |
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| PhoenixoKaZe | Jun 7 2009, 09:42 PM Post #6 |
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I might write my own story in a few days, depends on my mood tho lol xD |
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| TheBlackCrow | Oct 16 2009, 11:48 PM Post #7 |
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Wow Chris another one... Didn't th9ink I'd see that anytime soon... |
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